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27771055 - bedroom with moonlight and smoke - Advanced Sleep Technologies,  Inc. |

oh, You ... you found me again unveiled amid the bosom of my dreams my consciousness peeled away ... engulfed in a twilight mist for the memories of you to feast upon drowning in the fathoms of your gaze your scent - pouring its alert fascination into my head ... the tang of your pulpy tongue that confection sweet of your skin, resplendent (and the even warmer places it led to) vessels and walls and fair, tepid flesh ... your intent within it all, to conduct me while allowing me the sway to exploit my exploitation of the moments - letting me control your control of me ... coy, seductive smile on your face perfecting your line and movements as a ballerina should - fluid ... edgy it is all still there ... as if the years were phantoms gone with a breath of irresolute regret and you inhabit me now as then preying on my sleep-time meanderings, without mercy ... without an ounce of benevolence oh, you ... no other vexes me so completely, so purely no one pervades my nettled dreams as you do nor will anyone ... ever ... twilight always comes far too soon, and much too bright for truths ... the love that we both swore eternity to - that we knew with all conviction to be as sure as change ... to be as dire as death itself and as deep as the sea of suns is now nothing but a damp blemish ... on my pillow.

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Date: 4/29/2021 9:39:00 AM
Gregory, Congratulations in Brian Strand's contest!!
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:40:00 PM
there is that amazing Bardenesque style. Amazing, and congrats on the big win (I failed miserably this time)
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Date: 4/27/2021 6:09:00 AM
BRILLIANT Big Congrats to win TOP
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Date: 4/4/2020 4:46:00 PM
Gregory this was amazing! Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 4/4/2020 2:43:00 PM
Strong imagery, Greg-- congrats on your win, my friend!
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Date: 7/11/2018 10:17:00 AM
Yeah Greg, beautiful phrasing that is uniquely you, engulfed in a twilight mist, drowning in the fathoms of your gaze, impeccable writing...your ballerina still haunting your dreams...I see!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/11/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, my good friend, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it! Yeah, she will always be a deep-seated love, without closure, (as are one-or-two others, but she by far the deepest) ... a consistent muse, I guess, and perhaps that's what lost love is meant for us "sensitive, creative" types. I sometimes wish I DIDN'T feel so deeply ... I imagine you can relate. Blessings, John.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:05:00 AM
Hi Gregory, this is Beautiful!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/9/2018 8:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! :-)

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