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Oh, she is quite frail now and very old, When she walks you can tell she is in pain; Loves a nap in the sun and hates the cold, Beautiful, I whisper- my tears like rain. Oh, please time stop clicking, I scream in vain, All she gives is unconditional love, Its hard to think of her dwelling above; She is an old cat and is my best friend, Oh, her death- sorrow hard to let go of. I held her to my heart until the end . . . . _________________________ May 15, 2016 Poetry/Dizain/Sad Copyright Protected, ID 16-9584-36-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2017 1:09:00 PM

:'( you have made me tear up with this write, Broken Wings, our pets are so much a part of us..Nicely done. Hugs Eve ~`*

Dm Babbit

Date: 11/9/2017 9:14:00 AM

Sad but frequently experience, well expressed inner feeling and emotions. Good luck in the contest. DMB

James Inman

Date: 11/9/2017 6:40:00 AM

A touching poem BW. I have had my share of animals in my life. It's always sad to see them go.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2017 5:38:00 PM

oh, you break MY heart, Broken wings!!! This is beautifully sad. For your challenge, it's to do two of these, right? (double the length of what you did)

Constance La France
Date: 11/8/2017 6:28:00 PM

That's correct Andrea, 2 verses of the form for my contest, Empty Your Soul With Words. Thanks for visiting.