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Running From the Sun

See me move see me run see me pass my shadow by running from the sun. Facing ever forward eyes focused far ahead, long shadow growing shorter running from the sun. Driving hard to catch the moon as it falls below the trees, pulling darkness farther down as daylight fills the sky. I'm running from the sun again see me pass my shadow by; driving hard to catch the moon as daylight fills the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/31/2016 9:35:00 AM
Nice one , Edward! It flows nicely :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 12/31/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Heidi I'm glad you like it.
Date: 12/29/2016 11:05:00 PM
Nice, Edward. Continuous!
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Edward Mccall
Date: 12/30/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Doug. :) and happy new year

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