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Rose-Colored Passion

it's raining again, been this way for days; swirls of graying clouds hiding the blue of skies and my eyes my lips seem wetter than everything else that rises without sun, the river's rising again, perhaps higher than my own ego as i lose myself in the pockets of current. current, and past events build this dam against what it is that i love, damn her and them the same. i lay, head down, drowning in the only breath i know your chest rising and falling between the sighs that bridges together reality and dreams, and i'm not giving up my last breath through any of these storms that fall from winded words, instead, i'll keep breathing deeper and deeper attuned with your own breath, as we make love, reality from dreams last night, i saw a rainbow through your eyes and i settled myself deeper in your heart long before you ever drifted off to sleep this morning, your gentle touch, the arousal of my dreams, becomes the sun through rose-colored passion, and love again blossoms blending all that is real from little pockets of rain.

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Date: 2/24/2020 8:25:00 AM
Like soft watercolors when you write romance the most beautiful picture appears. Congrats on your won my friend
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Chris... not often my muse pens of romance but sometimes she does... hugs
Date: 2/22/2020 4:51:00 PM
A very romantic verse Sandra, congrats on your win Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/22/2020 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom... hugs
Date: 2/18/2016 10:13:00 PM
So tender, so thought provoking. Your words are written with such, that one is forced to pause to consider the meaning ... one can't rush it. What you did in this one section was just so clever ... "in the pockets of current ... current, and past events" ... it's very inventive how you bring out both those meanings. I loved this, Sandra! You really drew me in...
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:06:00 PM
This is really good! Loved this piece.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/7/2016 7:14:00 PM
thank you so much Carol...nice to meet you!
Date: 8/6/2014 8:01:00 PM
Hello, Sandra... I am fairly new on the soup. Andrea Dietrich told me about your poetry and said she thought I would like it. I do. I have read several and hope to read more. I see you have not posted anything for a while. Are you are writing? I didn't for quite some years, but have been at it again recently. You are still appreciated.
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Date: 5/6/2014 12:14:00 PM
I'm sunk happily in the love storm. Awed by how you express the synchronized breath of a couple's affection Sandra, WOW! A gorgeous fighting spirit. A FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:38:00 AM
Romantic...sensual...passionate...all in one go. Immensely enjoyed. cu // paul
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:07:00 PM
Lovely win Sandra... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/31/2014 6:33:00 AM
A rose that grows in the heart will bloom forever . Lovely poem . Thank you.
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:59:00 PM
A beautiful passionate write, that was such a pleasure to read.
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Date: 1/11/2014 7:45:00 AM
Good morning Sandra, I have missed your visits.
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Date: 1/8/2014 12:42:00 PM
beautifully pictured rose piece
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:50:00 PM
Hey, sandy, hope you had a great day. Just stopping by to say hi.
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:17:00 PM
i loved reading this last night so i came back to read it again great job on this write and congrads on your winning poem. cheri also i am glad to recieve your comment on the trail of the gypies, i think we all have a gypies in all of us. cheri
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:24:00 PM
splendid write Sandra..congrats on your win
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2014 7:33:00 PM
thank you my friend....hugs
Date: 1/7/2014 9:58:00 AM
Good morning Sandra, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2014 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, what a pleasant surprise :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2014 4:09:00 PM
A romantic and passionate write, great visual very appealing, great job here. cheri sorry my comment is short but i am not well right now. cheri
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Cherl, hope you are feeling better soon! hugs
Date: 1/5/2014 12:59:00 PM
Sandra, Out of the damp came forth sweetness, very good….David
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2014 7:32:00 PM
thank you so much David... hugs
Date: 1/5/2014 11:31:00 AM
Just stopping by to say hello and see if you had a new write.. Regards, Ken
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/7/2014 7:31:00 PM
Hello Ken and thank you...hope to have time to write soon :) hugs
Date: 1/4/2014 1:41:00 PM
This is so romantic! Just stunning and feels so real.
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard! Hugs
Date: 1/3/2014 2:41:00 PM
i like the way you subtly dovetailed the rain with heave of passion... so well quilled, sara.. one for the boos!. huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2014 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Nette Hugs
Date: 1/2/2014 4:22:00 PM
Wonderful write, so visual. well done. take care. Pete.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Pete! :)
Date: 1/2/2014 2:54:00 PM
I am taken away by your poetry, Sandra....amazingly sensual, but also rather melancholy, sad, as if the love may be fleeting, and not for keeping..... you write beautifully!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2014 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Carrie...Happy New Year! Hugs
Date: 1/2/2014 8:41:00 AM
A subtle sensual poem woven in poetic metaphor! I likd d allusion to d river. Kudos. Nice to read u again. Warmest new yr greetings.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2014 9:12:00 PM
Thank you...Happy New Year my friend! Hugs
Date: 1/2/2014 2:47:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic written Sandra - Love it!! - Happe New Year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2014 9:12:00 PM
Thank you...Happy New Year! hugs
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