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‘Twas on a morn’ in early spring When I met Rose Marie In a garden Where she sat - upon a bench Beneath a willow tree Where - with a glance My heart was stabbed With pangs of jealousy For it was - very plain to see She was - by far - more beautiful than me She spoke - with colored words - like rainbows Spun with threads of gold As she described the man she loved With all her heart and soul She told me - of his beauty Raven hair and eyes of green And as she talked - he appeared - before me As in a - living dream She told me - how she met him On the Shore of Evermore There in the fields - above the cliffs Amid the mist - an ocean roar She told me how - with their first kiss He carried her away As he poured his love - into her soul There - so high above - that wind-swept bay With Heaven - but a breath away Her words - like magic - in that moment Cast a spell on me For I too now - had fallen - so deeply - in love With Cannon Lee I longed to feel his breath His lips upon my velvet skin I longed to quench - the lustful thoughts That now burned - so deep within So - when Rose Marie - stood up to leave And turned her back on me I dug my thorns into her wrist And sealed - my evil deed My jealousy - now turned to poison Ran quickly through her veins And as she tried - to pry me loose I clawed her - once again "Tainted blood" - is what they say Stole his love away And that is how - I came to be here On these cliffs today. So tenderly - he holds me now And finally kisses me As his tears - fall on my open petals And trickle - down my leaves Then - from his lips - there comes a cry Of such despair - it cracks the sky “ My darling - my love - my life Why did you have to die?” And here so high - above these cliffs These cliffs of ‘Evermore’ I hear her name - resounding - above the ocean roar ‘Rose Marie’ - ‘Rose Marie’ As he cast me - with a final kiss Into the raging sea. ~~~ Author: Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/5/2011 12:19:00 PM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Lainie. And no I don't plan on leaving the soup that is unless the Lord has different plans for me. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 3:49:00 PM
(HA HA) thought i'd forgot you..? (well think again!) Enjoyed this bittersweet write Laine, keep them coming...
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:19:00 AM
Hi Elaine, You must let me know when you finish your novel so I can read it. I've read this one before, of course, and I enjoyed it even more the second time. Love, daver
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:34:00 PM
I think I recall this one from when you must have posted it before. What an impact it has. A very special poem of yours, with its twist at the end. I love it, Elaine!
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Date: 6/10/2011 11:14:00 AM
Jealousy is such a powerful emotion, Lainie. The raven, "evermore" and the name "Lee" had me thinking of Poe's poem Annabel Lee throughout. He blamed her death on jealous angels who stole her from his kingdom by the sea. Compelling write, dear. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:43:00 PM
beautiful and pleasing personification, Elaine
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Elaine George
Date: 6/2/2011 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Dr. Ram. In the last while, I have been very busy writing my novel and haven't been writing poetry. I hope to return to the soup soon, and commnt on your latest postings. Elaine
Date: 6/2/2011 12:46:00 PM
100++++ this is one of your all time best poems Lainie. I could read it over and over a dozen times each time I read it again. I will be sending you an email with my new address soon my dear friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. I wil hopefully be back to the soup soon and catch up with eveyone's lastest posts. bfn. yf4l, lainie

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