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Romantic Charm In Four Lines - This One Worked

Hey baby there's a roast in the oven And all the dishes are done I washed your socks and underwear Now let's have some fun *not for contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 7:21:00 PM

oh you should have entered this one. It's pure delight!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/16/2018 9:43:00 AM

Lol! I figured it was exactly what he wasn't looking for ;p

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/14/2018 5:05:00 PM

So clever and cute, Maureen! Janice

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/16/2018 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Janice! :)) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 12:37:00 PM

You didnt enter? Why not?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:09:00 PM

Romancing the cheese ;) delighted you read it! Thought I'd leave room for true romantic contenders. Happy VD my friend <3

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/14/2018 8:47:00 AM

With such a playful offer, dessert preceding the roast, forgotten then the dryer, likewise, dinner was toast.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 10:51:00 AM

Lol! And the dog get's the crispy roast ;P

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/13/2018 10:46:00 PM

Wow, another gem, I think there is going to be lots of these 4 liners sharing top spot. Good luck Maureen. Regards Tom

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Tom! Didn't enter this one, not the cheese whiz he's looking for ;P xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2018 9:55:00 PM

You are so right, it works every time. Bravo, Maureen. Cute poem.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 7:50:00 AM

Tee hee yup! Thank you Line :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/13/2018 6:10:00 PM

Not wasting any time...are you...that is down to earth love...All the best Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 7:47:00 AM

Giggles, yup! Thank you dear xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2018 5:59:00 PM

Now that would work if it came from a MAN saying it to ME (but I do this stuff for hubbie all the time. haha) VEry cute one, Maureen. Hope it was your hubbie saying it to YOU

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 7:47:00 AM

Lol I know eh?! No that was me saying to him... I'm awful for not doing dishes ;) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/13/2018 5:14:00 PM

Another winner, he's going to be spoilt for choice, I'm sure... Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/14/2018 7:45:00 AM

Tee hee ;) I didn't enter this one, it's not what he's looking for. Thank you though! xomo