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YOU'RE MY EVERYTHING


Right from the second we met I knew
One day you would become my wife.
Married to the girl of my dreams, you are
All I ever wanted in my life
Now you cradle our newborn son so
Tenderly in your loving arms.
I love you more with every day that passes and
Cherish the day you came into my life

Romantic acrostic Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton

2/15/18

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Date: 3/13/2018 12:50:00 AM
Hi Jan . Your poem is a simple accrostic but deeply touching. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your solidarity earlier with mine.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 3/15/2018 9:04:00 AM
It was written out of fear , the next out of faith. Read it
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/13/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Jannie, my thoughts are with you it must be so frightening for you and your family living with the threat of such brutality against people:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 2/21/2018 4:40:00 PM
Trying to catch up on my poetry reading. This is a really nice poem. Well thought out. When I saw it was an acrostic, I wondered what the word would be, duh....romantic!!! Congrats and thanks for commenting on "Getting Dressed Mad"........Patrick
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:54:00 AM
I'm struggling to catch up too Pat I had all the comments to reply too just a bit busy and not much time for soup at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2018 7:37:00 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your placement... hugs... Mick
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Mick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2018 11:52:00 AM
Congrats, Jan. I think you must be very busy. Caycay and Connie too. Not getting many emails today but I have a Netflix marathon lined up when I get through here!!! Hope you are having a really good day!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:50:00 AM
I am rather busy and have little time for soup:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2018 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations, Jan on your win.
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2018 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jan. Tom
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2018 2:18:00 PM
A lovely poem, Jan. Most deserved congrats on your winner of a poem!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:48:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2018 1:46:00 PM
Great write Jan, I appreciated the love radiating from this poem well done! Congrats on a fine placement!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:48:00 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2018 12:13:00 PM
Sweet and very well-written, Jan! Janice
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2018 12:47:00 PM
Lovely write, lovely family, best wishes in the contest...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thanks Charlie-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2018 7:32:00 AM
Lovely. The fluidity in the poem is sleek. Best wishes in the contest Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thanks Samuel:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2018 4:41:00 AM
Really lovely writing Jan. l love romantic poems but lm no good writing them myself so l enjoy others gifts in finding the right words like your self.x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:45:00 AM
I struggle with romance, much prefer humour jackie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 9:15:00 PM
Very sweet poem, Jan! Such a beautiful, mature, deep love expressed here! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 8:09:00 PM
Your poem goes so beautifully together with the picture; a very heartfelt romantic write Jan! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 2/22/2018 5:44:00 AM
Thanks Che:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 7:57:00 PM
Very nice acrostic, Jan! Enjoyed! Funny - the characters I have to type are JAN ;)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:44:00 AM
I love it when the captcha's are apt:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 7:33:00 PM
You went with the topic and just flew with it. I am still pondering the best words to use for each letter. hahaha!!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 5:23:00 PM
this is a wonderful poem, Jan , a true story
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:43:00 AM
True for me Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 5:21:00 PM
This is lovely Jan. Flows so well. Good wishes.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 5:05:00 PM
So sweet Jan. Good luck with this one. It's beautiful.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thanks Jean I thought you would like this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 1:32:00 PM
Jan, you are just a super gifted poet - you have the talent to just match the right words with the emotions! Just so sweet and loving! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:41:00 AM
You are too kind Pandita!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 11:04:00 AM
Jan, Beautiful, followed the criteria to the letter, pun intended. Good luck in the contest... Mick
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks Mick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 10:28:00 AM
Ew la la the smooth flow is lovely. Not just a wishy washy valentine card type of write, but a write that conveyed depth within the restricted line limit. Well done, Jan! Hugs ... CayCay (I'm still a bit rattled, but present, presently)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, thinking of you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 9:50:00 AM
Beautifully done Jan, and you always have great pics with your work, good luck in the contest. Tom.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:38:00 AM
I always said I would never use the photo feature but I have changed my mind totally as it can really enhance a poem - i sometimes use pictures that are nothing to do with the theme just to confuse people lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 9:35:00 AM
Lovely fluidity! Wonderful Arcostic! Love love love my best to you in the contest! xomo <3
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2018 9:13:00 AM
Exceptionally good acrostic using very plain words ... A credit indeed ... Obviously going to win ...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/22/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx
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