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R oses, ruby red you always brought with you O h, my darling, I love you so much it hurts my heart M y whispers tell you so over and over A nd time and space does not diminish how I adore you N ow, sit my darling and we will dine, and T ip our wine glasses to love eternal I n the flickering candles we speak so softly C an we skip the final course, my love R uby lips need your kisses O h, come my love, follow me and, lets M ake this night last long, oh kiss me my love A nd hold me all the night in your arms, and N othing can take you from me until the morning T wo swirling in the moonlight as one . . . because I inside this dream we are one forever, evermore, oh C an it be true my love, that you are but a name engraved. _________________________________ February 17, 2018 Poetry/Acrostic/Romantic, Romantic Copyright Protected, ID 18-9952-51-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Romantic Acrostic sponsor, John Hamilton Fifth Place

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Date: 2/22/2018 5:31:00 AM
wow you did a double acrostic Constance, the second one was so sad, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:08:00 AM
Jan, thank you for visiting my poem and the congrats ~
Date: 2/19/2018 11:48:00 AM
The second poem echoes the other. This was very clever on top of being very romantic!! Sorry it took me so long to see it. Congrats, sweet Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:08:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for that nice comment ~
Date: 2/18/2018 2:23:00 PM
The last lines gave me shivers. What an amazing poem, BW. A definite FAVE for me.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:09:00 AM
Line, thank you for the amazing and the fave ~
Date: 2/18/2018 1:48:00 PM
So nicely done Constance, congrats on a nice placement!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:09:00 AM
John, thank you for the contest and my placement ~
Date: 2/17/2018 7:33:00 PM
Double the pleasure with your lovely set of romantic poems..well written, BW..best for a win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2018 9:11:00 AM
Vijay, thank you for the lovely and compliment ~

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