River Run

Triple dribble from the clouds Hitting rocks skyward bound First a splash becomes a dash Dribbling tickling mountain rock River run souring song has begone Contours valley floors meet as one Beauty beast mineral feast flow Pacing racing tracing steps Going flowing meeting sea River run never done no man no dam for contest , Sponsored by: Silent One

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/8/2018 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this alliteration poem. Very nicely done.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 4:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Niall. Well done.

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:36:00 PM

Hi Line , Thank you my friend ::))Hugs~~Niall

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/2/2018 9:07:00 PM

Beautiful imagery with lovely accents of alliteration, Niall. Wonderful to read, my friend. Congratulations on your fine win. Warmest wishes..

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2018 4:35:00 PM

Hi Susan , thank you my friend first time to try ::))Hugs~~~Niall

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2018 12:35:00 PM

Wonderful verse, Niall! I so enjoyed reading! Congratulations on your win in the alliteration contest... Hugs Eve ~`*

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/2/2018 4:32:00 PM

Hi Eve , thank you for comment , glad you enjoyed::)))Hugs~~Niall

Silent One

Date: 4/1/2018 3:15:00 PM

Nice poem and use of alliteration Niall, just thought is was a bit short to finish higher.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/1/2018 4:10:00 PM

Hi Silent One , Thank you for placement was not expecting to be on a placement as it was my first try at alliteration :::)))) ~~Niall

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2018 3:12:00 PM

- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/1/2018 4:07:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you and well done to you too , such an important subject you touched on ::)))Hugs~~Niall

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2018 12:15:00 PM

- "Evil Deeds" was my first alliteration ... - This was fun, Niall :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/28/2018 3:38:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for comment , my first too , not sure if I got it right or is there a right and wrong , I don't mind I enjoyed writing and really enjoyed yours an important subject ::)))Hugs~~~Niall

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/27/2018 11:56:00 PM

A fun read, Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/28/2018 11:12:00 AM

Hi Line, thanks for comment , this is my first time to try Alliteration , ::))) hugs~~~Niall

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/27/2018 9:07:00 PM

Triple smiles my friend :) :) :) this is such a fun read, I so enjoyed and loved it! Wishing you good luck in the contest... hugs all the way to Ireland :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/28/2018 11:07:00 AM

Hi Akkina ,thanks for comment , this is my first time to try Alliteration , ::)))))hugs~~~~~Niall