Rinse - Repeat

a city sleeps days debris washed away streetlight showers John G. Lawless ©6/18/2018

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Date: 6/22/2018 9:26:00 AM

OH nice twist with street light showers. Love that image.

John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2018 8:26:00 AM

just one of the majestic views of city life. Thanks for stopping by Andrea.

Date: 6/21/2018 2:58:00 PM

Love haiku's, great image John, never heard of them until I joined soup.

John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2018 8:24:00 AM

Lucky you!!! They've been haunting me since High School....

Date: 6/21/2018 11:52:00 AM

Well done John...

John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Charlie

Date: 6/21/2018 9:21:00 AM

A superb haiku, very vivid imagery John:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Nature and the city do have their moments

Date: 6/21/2018 9:05:00 AM

I get a vivid mental picture, John. well done!

John Lawless
Date: 6/24/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, capturing a moment in a few lines - the challenge of the haiku