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Ria's Butterflies - Nursery Rhyme

Little Ria's eyes found Butterflies fluttering around Pink, purple and blue She followed them around Soft wind blew And up up they flew! Date: 03/09/2021 Submitted for: Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/20/2021 6:13:00 PM

Nursery rhymes are fun, aren't they? Yours is lovely! Hugs ~ Mala

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/13/2021 10:07:00 PM

Wow! Enchanting nursery rhyme! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2021 3:48:00 PM

Adorable!! Congrats, dear. yes, you must try kyrielle. It's a favorite form of mine. You just have to find a godo catch phrase for the ending lines of each stanza

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2021 3:08:00 AM

- Back with congratulations, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2021 2:55:00 AM

Creative winner. Congrats. Way to go. Sara

Carol Mitra

Date: 3/11/2021 5:29:00 PM

So cute Ani...loved it :) Congrats on your win...much love and hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2021 5:08:00 PM

Just adorable, Ani! Congrats on your high placement in Eve's contest. Light and joy, Gershon

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2021 2:36:00 PM

Anitha, wonderful Nursery rhyme, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2021 2:24:00 PM

this is so charming, , many congrats on your win Anitha:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/11/2021 1:21:00 PM

Hi Anitha, This is so cute adorable. And so age-appropriate. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/11/2021 5:10:00 AM

So cute... Reads like a winner...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2021 5:30:00 PM

this is just adorable and very fitting for really young children. I had not noticed it was a contest for kids under 5, so I wonder if my rhyme is a bit too difficult.ha!! Wish I could see more but gotta get dinner in the oven