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Love Dies

Oh, this hurt - this pain won’t end My heart , my soul, you were my friend Crumbled autumn leaves turned brown Blown away without a sound Silent, my tears, from blue eyes made red Your love dies with me alone in my bed Release my love from the prison you’ve made Release my heart that was yours if you stayed. Written for: Rhyme Battle IX Sponsored by: Juli-Michelle October 17, 2017

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Date: 2/5/2018 12:31:00 AM
Lovely withering of Love ....... Lovely lementations Release my love from the prison you’ve made Release my heart that was yours if you stayed.
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Judith S
Date: 2/5/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit Muhammad ... and your kind comments. Best, Judy
Date: 1/26/2018 6:37:00 PM
Such lovely lamentations Judy. Your sorrow is wonderfully heartfelt and dramatic in its expression. Another great write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Judith S
Date: 2/5/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thank you dear Susan. This reply to your comment is a little late. My apologies. I always appreciate your visits and amazing comment! :) <3 Judy
Date: 1/18/2018 1:11:00 AM
short and oh so bittersweet. I like this one a lot, sweetie,
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Judith S
Date: 1/18/2018 2:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea!! So sweet of you to explore my poems. You are a genuine original my friend ??. ~ Judy
Date: 11/2/2017 3:58:00 PM
A very sad write...
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Date: 10/28/2017 8:55:00 AM
Some men are fools. Good luck in the contest.
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Judith S
Date: 10/29/2017 10:56:00 AM
As are some women ;) Again ... thank you!!!!!!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:56:00 AM
Well rhymed Judith, best wishes in the contest...
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Judith S
Date: 10/17/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind wishes Charlie. Best, Judy

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