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Revision of "my Summer Vacation"

I made something beautiful come out of the ground painted vibrations made beautiful sounds imagined shapes and colors that delight the eyes planted them in a garden surrounded them with various skies Spoke as God painted creation on the scroll words that were silent beautiful to behold words not said but sung describing to the unseeing what God has done Glorifying is the meaning of plants posing, voices singing of forces molding, chemicals blending bringing into being other things with feelings

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Date: 4/28/2014 11:11:00 AM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2014 10:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, john
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:29:00 PM
Hello John, congratulations. , I have a fun blog for all my winning poems. Stop by and enjoy IF YOU LIKE. Just in case you don't know which blog belongs to this particular contest. Here's the link, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22228&PoetID=18720 Drop by and leave a smile. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:20:00 PM
Beautifully written, John. I think everyday about an animal, or stars , or plants singing God's praises because we don't do what we are suppose to do and praise him. I fall short so much. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 12/12/2008 9:00:00 AM
By the way, I didn't mean to mutilate your baby, merely wiped a spot of dribble of his chin. This is still one of my favorites. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:48:00 AM
The visual quality of the imagery is spectacular in this. The words flow gently and smoothly and make this just a wonderful read. Michael
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Date: 11/18/2008 4:42:00 PM
great imagery and rhyme. I love this thanks for sharing
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