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The 100 Most Beautiful and Breathtaking Places in the World in Pictures (part 2)

*Inspired by a photo. (I am not sure why the photo is showing on my end, but not showing here for some) Water is like glass Nature's mirror to be seen Clear skies bring sun to the snow Shining on the tops of cliffs All is pure and quiet While sitting on the rocks Stable and calm Clarity comes to thoughts In the fresh wilderness Where beauty strikes Revelations surface Being part of a scene At just the right time Not a sound can be heard Just an inner calling, To be followed from here Where serenity was born Heidi Sands 2/23/18

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Joseph May

Date: 2/23/2018 4:12:00 PM

Beautiful and serene imagery Heidi..Very nicely penned..

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2018 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/23/2018 3:59:00 PM

A great opening line..and the words get better and better with each subsequent thought..well articulated throughout..with excellent ending line..well written, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2018 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to see your comment on this and appreciate all your support :)