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Rest Within

Darling, I’m no longer "In Search Of Love" on today You showed me what true love was all about I found Myself In Someone Else on that day "Love Remains alive in death", I have no doubt You showed me what true love was all about Somehow you knew to "Kiss Away My Tears" "Love Remains alive in death",I have no doubt My heart was in "Fragments" for many years Somehow you knew to "Kiss Away My Tears" I can now "Rest Within" your warm embrace My heart was in "Fragments" for many years It’s a joy waking up to your handsome face I can now "Rest Within" your warm embrace I found "Myself In Someone Else" on that day It’s a joy waking up to your handsome face Darling, I’m no longer "In Search Of Love on today" This Pantoum is dedicated to my friend The Romantic Warrior Freddie Robison. I took some of the titles from Freddie's romanticism poems and wrote A Pantoum. 1.In Search Of Love 2.Myself In Someone Else 3.Love Remains Alive In Death 4.Kiss Away My Tears 5.Fragments 6.Rest Within I would also like to thank Silent One for the inspiration. 11-20-17 Alexis Y.

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Date: 11/21/2017 7:53:00 AM
Glad you were inspired, Freddie is a great guy and I know he will love this..
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:10:00 AM
pensively smooth write so well impressed on my mind... i like how creative you wove the titles into your poem, alexis.. huggs
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:08:00 AM
Marvelous write, Alexis, very creative on the titles. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:45:00 PM
And congrats to Freddie for being a romantic warrior!
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:44:00 PM
It's fun doing this kind of thing. I remember a contest where we had to use our titles to make all the lines of our poem and a pantoum contest where we had to use song titles of a famous singer we liked. You did very well with your very own titles, Alexis.
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:55:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much for the nice comment and visit. I took the title's from Freddie's poems and wrote the Pantoum:-) Alexis
Date: 11/20/2017 9:51:00 PM
A beautifully expressed pantoum Alexis written in such a lovely dedication to Freddie, another fine poet. What a treasure this write is ... Lovely inspired and inspiring poetry!
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Date: 11/20/2017 8:41:00 PM
What a wonderful pantoum/ tribute to such a fine poet ~aka Freddie! Awesome Alexis!~Che :)
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Date: 11/20/2017 8:04:00 PM
WoW! What can I say, Alexis. This is too beautiful for my humbled soul. You are a true friend. This a lovely pantoum written w/skill and ingenuity. I LOVE it! Aurora bright write. Going in the fave file for sure. Love and hugs always.
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Date: 11/20/2017 4:09:00 PM
Beautiful dedication to Freddie Alexis..best wishes
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Date: 11/20/2017 2:49:00 PM
Oh my Alexis! This is excellent. You did so well with, titles from Freddie's poems and to write a pantoum! I enjoyed this today :)
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:43:00 AM
Alexis, this is such a beautifully written Pantoum. I really like this form and yours fit together so perfectly well. I'm sure Freddie is proud also. John
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