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Robert J. Lindley, 10-10-2017

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NOTE:  Edited to present today... a dark one, since its nearing Halloween , a somber mood strikes.

Requiem On Death, Its Fated Black Hand Fated death, should thy black-hand descend upon me, I vow to give thee only blood and rusty bones. No cries, to spare my fleeting life, its memory Nor bartering for that which Fate never postpones. With regrets of missing family, my true love Waiting that day, preparing to defeat my fears. Leaving behind all, reminiscent and tired of Pray I, thy bitter pains, bring soul's welcoming tears. Knowing all mortal time is but a blinded leap From echoes of ancient forests of gold and stones. Moments of happiness begging that twilight sleep Dreams of magnificent love and its softest moans. Shall I fail and I give thee thy sought after cries I beg mercy, battles fought, with few victories Perhaps my folly was dear truth this heart denies Sweetly seduced by thy dark shadow mysteries. Fated death, should thy black-hand descend upon me I vow to give thee only blood and rusty bones No cries, to spare my fleeting life, its memory Nor bartering for that which Fate never postpones. Robert J. Lindley, 10-10-2017 NOTE: Edited to present today... a dark one, since its nearing Halloween , a somber mood strikes.

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Date: 10/11/2017 9:02:00 AM
Nor bartering for that which Fate never postpones is a great quote Robert. Homerun on this one my friend...
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Date: 10/11/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Michael. So true my friend... "Perhaps my folly was dear truth this heart denies" * For Fate decreed I fall, for (her) woe begotten lies * A line I cut, and perhaps should not have..... I did so to put 99.99% emphasis on Fate and Death and not on a lost love(*her*
Date: 10/11/2017 12:05:00 AM
Robert, this is such a great one. it does fit the october mood!:) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/11/2017 12:16:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Death is dark and dark is the Halloween mood. I have just read and commented on your wonderful new poem. Exceptional writing my friend.
Date: 10/10/2017 11:34:00 PM
Exquisitely dark and truthful, my friend, and so full of imagery that wrenches the heart ... I so love your writing, Robert - I wish I had more free time to just read ... soon, I hope. Wonderful work!
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I wrote that first verse and then suddenly the rest of this poem flowed out non-stop. Life is what one makes of it but Fate and death takes no prisoners. Yes my friend, I've been there far too often myself, with the too busy to read and visit here thing.
Date: 10/10/2017 10:15:00 PM
Death catches some quicker than others, fate can be fickle, great write! I wrote a poem you may like God Bess America, dedicated to War vets! :)
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:20:00 PM
Yes, that fickle finger of fate my friend. Its maddening sometimes.. Especially in regards to who dies and who does not--as to oft the worst, most evil people live into old age, while the young and innocent ones die--that is when I most often question Fate..... Will go check out your poem my friend...
Date: 10/10/2017 8:18:00 AM
It's a great poem Robert! Love it how your first and last stanza are the same, makes it extra powerful.
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Date: 10/10/2017 12:47:00 PM
Darren my friend thanks, and yes that is the desired and intended effect of the repetition. AFTER STATING THE CHALLENGE SO TO SPEAK...
Date: 10/10/2017 7:08:00 AM
Wow, that first verse! Love it, Robert!!
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Date: 10/10/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Kim. That was the verse that inspired the poem in the first place.. Everything just flowed on after that..
Date: 10/10/2017 6:57:00 AM
A very dark and deep write, death will catch up with us all one day.. Another excellent write my friend..
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Date: 10/10/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I plan on delaying that day just as long as I can... one can not escape entirely but one can delay it sometimes by eating healthy and making prudent choices in life..

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