Rememberings

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To hold the moonbeam in your eyes and trace A girl's joy now buried in past embrace: I let stairs of life roll within my heart While moments flash as they did from the start-- To taste our laughter making nights complete You hover around, sweet the air I greet. 29 April 2019 Free verse or Rhyme Contest of Eve Roper Photo#1

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/8/2019 3:44:00 PM

Now this is exceptional verse in classic style. That it is written in such grace and perfect rhyme enhances an already well woven and image feasting tapestry my friend!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2019 7:17:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest. Come and visit my Blog.. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2019 1:55:00 PM

Beautiful writing as always, Nette! Congrats for the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2019 1:06:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2019 3:48:00 AM

I think you just grabbed the crown and ran away with her in Eve's contest, Nette.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2019 8:46:00 AM

Beautiful and poetic, Nette. Amazing what a sliver of moon can inspire! Hugs // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/30/2019 6:28:00 PM

A "Rememberings," that beam with beauty! A sweet taste of memories that captures the heart! A unique imagery with compelling music that enrapture the mind! In my fave list and a win. You amaze with words, dear Nette.. warmest wishes. Blessings.