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Remembering

REMEMBERING remembering new year’s eve what didn’t happen no horns confetti fireworks i fell asleep in my lazy boy a restroom call i’ve been asleep in my chair it’s 2:00 a.m. 1/1/15 now I remember my dream horns confetti fireworks Dave Austin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2015 11:23:00 PM

Going offline soon to eat a late dinner. Just wanted to say goodnight and again, how much I like this poem of yours.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/14/2015 1:54:00 AM

No-body knew you fell asleep, so you really didn't need to worry about the episode..' now however you have told every-body, that means some-body will be bound to complain, I suggest we keep an eye out to see If some-body gets involved, Daver at this point I believe we will need a description of the person I wonder if you might be able to help in this matter, signed concerned.. Joe'

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/13/2015 5:40:00 PM

You must have been kissed by your muse as you slept, Daver. Still, I think you must have awoken at the best part of the New Year's celebration. Here we'd both fallen asleep and didn't wake up 'til the morning. I think it's still taking a snooze. Keep warm, love, Mikki

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/12/2015 3:09:00 PM

Oh I love this one! It's been a long time since I stayed up just to watch the clock tick.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2015 4:40:00 PM

this one is very very cool. Somewhat like the early Dallas tv show, where the girl wakes up and it was all a dream.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/11/2015 1:00:00 PM

This is a poem that asks, what’s the hurry....slow down the New Year will come in its own good time! Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/11/2015 9:36:00 AM

I don't enjoy New Year Daver I find it depressing - that said i couldn't wait to see the back of 2014 . I think being asleep and missing all the 'fun' sounds idyllic to me - very few fireworks went off on the Island this year and I don't watch it on TV. Enjoyed the write:-) Hugs Jan xx