Red Berries

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Bright red berries shine on the bush outside the window Looking like drops of candy or almost like balls of glass A display with a mixture of red and green it shows Spreading larger every year, across the area so fast The colors of Christmas are here, shining in July With this treat of beauty growing in this sunlit day As the leaves gently move in the sun under the sky It brings memories of all seasons in a pleasant way Heidi Sands 7/29/17

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/6/2017 8:43:00 PM

Hello Heidi this poem reminds me of the berries I had on my berries tree when I lived in Wiarton. I always watched the birds fly to eat the berries. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2017 8:40:00 PM

No i do not see the picture of the berry tree.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2017 6:13:00 AM

Hi Darlene. I am wondering if you could see the photo of the red berries? I can't see it on my end. That is nice it brought to you a memory of seeing the berry tree. Thank you for your kind comment. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/29/2017 6:44:00 PM

I consider myself a man of all seasons but let's not get right to Christmas just yet. I love the fall colors and everything fall:) Lovely write, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2017 7:05:00 PM

LOL That is funny. OK no Christmas yet. :) Thanks DT.

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/29/2017 2:53:00 PM

Beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2017 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Mike :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2017 12:51:00 PM

I enjoyed this Heidi. My daughter has black berries growing in her yard and her boyfriend, who enjoys cooking, baked her a black berry pie with the crust shaped like a pineapple to remind her of home as she has lived in California for over a decade now. Thank you for the memory this stirred. Aloha, Connie ; )

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2017 12:53:00 PM

Hi Connie. It was showing a photo of them , now it isn't. Thank you for your comment. That is a nice story about the black berry pie and also shaped as a pineapple. ! I appreciate your visit. I love Hawaii, by the way. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2017 12:07:00 PM

This poem is a pleasant poem my friend! It calms me to read such a delightful piece! You have enthralled me by such a wonderful write! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2017 12:08:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your enthusiasm and support :)