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Rebuilding the Shed In the Backyard - Again

My son is out fixing up the shed. Winter is coming on. Needed doing he said. He had the time and the bound-to’s. I’m not used to this thought process, I’m not. Not from a child. I watch him for a while. Opening and closing gates as needed. The dust, sifted into powder from summer’s heat, poof’s with his steps. The heels of his jeans dragging strings on the ground, erase the tread of his boots. The shed is old. There is algae or lichen on the north side boards, where the wood is splintery gray. Some of the lichen florets are the color of sage, some the color of a bright orange rust, Circled with gray ones and black, their life cycle played out. He hammers nails and screws in screws while holding boards in place. Sweat glistening where skin is exposed, making long dark stains in his black shirt. Veins standing out against the strain, and Muscles laboring to prove he can do the job well, without a mother’s help. While he works I think about his father and how differently they work. His father preferring team work and orchestrated smooth motion working side by side, no extra movements – and he whistled. My son needs to prove his skills first – alone. The shed is done and it will brave another winter, keeping the horses sheltered from the elements. The wind, snow and horses milling about, will obliterate the trail of pant cuffs, Along with the memory of one cool day at the end of summer, When a man worked hard to rebuild their shelter.

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Date: 5/5/2015 9:37:00 PM
Touching poem i really like it, all the best EM
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Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/5/2015 10:20:00 PM
Thank you Edward. Appreciate you stopping by. ~ J ~
Date: 6/19/2010 2:10:00 PM
Hey, keep that son around. He will save you a lot of cash for a handyman. I can see him working away on the shed. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:04:00 AM
This is charming, Judith, and dome with craft and skill and thought. Congrats on the selection. Love. daver
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Judith. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2010 6:42:00 PM
Judith, This brings back lots of memories. Only my husband worked alone. Then when our oldest son would try to help they couldn't get along. Therefore when my son put a new motor in his pickup I was the one who worked with him. Good work, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:07:00 PM
Mnay congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Judith on your featured poem. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:08:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success. Karen
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