Reaching My Pinnacle - Contest
At the top of my mountain
Were many writers of words
Each step I took was fraught with despair
They were so good
I tentatively wrote and pasted on my page
No comment received
My heart sunk, was I that useless
Picking up the pen I started another
Yet another and another.
One day a comment appeared
My heart was bursting with joy
I had arrived,
someone deemed to comment
My journey to perfection had started
This was my achievement my aim.
Thank you to that person for helping me
Reach my pinnacle.
Penned 16 September 2014
Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014
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