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Below is the poem entitled RASPBERRY RAIN OF A HURRICANE which was written by poet Judy Emery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Raspberry rain that is pouring down pain
that is making the world insane
of the true Hurricane
red eyes that cry upon the table
where nothing is stable
the longing for peace 
for the rise of the sun
where life can be fun
Dawn fiery arms carrie on
that only wish to embrace the sea
of the Hurricane of the rasberry rain
that is pouring out more pain
Bones are dry from the souls who died
where people tried to be set free
why do they cry or even try
when they didn't listen to heed 
body aches but holding faith 
for the hurricane to leave
it is getting hard to breath
the winds scratch beneath the sheets of steel
hollowing down the streets
Non visions at the hour to come
strange when it comes to dreams
neither awake nor sleep 
but I still hear the sounds of those who weeps
in cold darken room filed with the sea
of darken dreams that comes to me
conspiracy of the millions that can see
the escape from the raspberry rain of the hurricane
watery ears that can hear what is near
holding on to all that fear
beneath our feet are the angery teeth 
I don't suppose the raspberry raindrops 
will come to a stop
it sounds like small feet to angery sea
some throw their self in water traffic 
where life becomes more unpredictable
bleary eyed that cry on high
that is wrapped in pain of the Hurricane.

Poetic Judy Emery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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