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Rapunzel -Fractured Rhyme-

Rapunzel, Rapunzel please shave off your hair, I keep tripping on it over here and way over there. It's getting too long why is it you can't see? One of these days soon it will be the death of me. Copyright © Cynthia Jones Jan.11/2015 Just something I came up with, while watching some of the movie "Tangled."

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David Fisher

Date: 1/12/2015 8:18:00 PM

This is creative, Cynthia. A bad hair day for everyone.

Cynthia Jones
Date: 3/23/2015 1:47:00 PM

Just think I didn't know exactly what happened in the movie (after I wrote this), what really happened, until I watched the entire movie later on that night when it repeated. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment David. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/12/2015 10:53:00 AM

Very nice verse Cynthia! Truly enjoyed dear friend .A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^

Cynthia Jones
Date: 3/23/2015 1:16:00 PM

:O) Hey there Dorian. Thank you so very much for stopping by have a read, leave a comment and for the rating. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia