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The joy of ocean’s ageless as blue skies, a power body stretched before our eyes. How great the grains of sand; so countless be, that form the earth which melts into the sea! 10/5/2020 for Rithimus Divisa 8 Poetry Contest, Sponsor Greg Barden from The Great Atlantic Dawn, written 8/27/2016

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Date: 10/8/2020 9:11:00 AM
A wonderful winning write, congrats Janis!
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Date: 10/8/2020 2:58:00 AM
Another gorgeous write, Janis, with lovely rhythm, phrasing and imagery, and a favorite muse that speaks to my heart! I am once again stunned that mine is the first comment, because this is excellent poetry, and deserves recognition and praise. Congrats and blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
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