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Random Thoughts 63, Eileenesque

**Eileenesque** 3 stanzas of 5 lines with a chosen set meter (syllable count) Must have a rhyme scheme; monorhyme seems to flow nicely Stanza one - line 5 is a combination of lines 1 and 2 Stanza two - line 5 is a combination of lines 2 and 3 Stanza three - line 5 is a combination of lines 4 and 1 in this stanza the situation "comes full circle and reverses the events in the quatrain." *A(broad)* Love, not our problem! that is my thought. Through tribulation, conversation. Be each others beacon of support, reduce and relax away tension, Conversation. Love, not our problem! My heart has fled, I travel a(broad), Stressed by your eternal damnation. Accusations, I am left distraught our fights stand as the culmination, Eternal damnation, left distraught! Long talks reprieve, harmless flirtation. Deprivation of love leaves me flawed after fleeing incarceration. Found justification now I'm gone. Talks reprieve, found justification. Jared Pickett 3/12/2014 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/12/2014 1:11:00 PM
HELLO!!! HI HI HI HI!!! I'm SO SO honored that you would even bother with this...WOW! I'm so thrilled to read this...you have NO idea! :) The content is so fascinating...and you do a reverse well. Just one thing...the fifth TAGGED line of each stanza...has the ENDINGS of the lines....Stanza 1..lines 1 & 2...Stanza 2...lines 3 & 4...Stanza 3...Lines 4 and the ending of line 1 of first stanza. I know...complicated right? Silly me! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! I'm TICKED PINKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!
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