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Rainy Season

RAINY SEASON Thunderbolts roar, gust thrusts, cloud melts, rain showers Plants bathe with branches, leaves, fruits and flowers. Splendid glistening greenery embowers. Rainy season entering: However, Just confusing amusing muse of lover. Lightening flash reminds sweet blush on your face. You own unique elegance in populace. Jumble of wobbling thoughts, I could not voice. Rains flooded flowing river: However, Just confusing amusing muse of lover. Refused love blends in tears with ceaseless rains Lost love sighs over sorrowful remains. New love freshens, cheers, excites entertains. Sweet Heart! Waiting for you Dear: However, Just confusing amusing muse of lover. 07/06/17 Re edited on 11\11\22 First Place Inspiring Rainy Season Contest by Sotto Poet

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Date: 12/1/2022 4:23:00 PM
Dear Anisha, your poem is so elegantly emotional with exquisite imagery. I just love the wording of “just confusing amusing muse of lover” - I love the internal rhyme and feeling of it and the repetition of it. Congratulations on your excellent win in Lasaad’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/18/2022 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Ani! I love your lover analogy!
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Date: 11/14/2022 5:15:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 11/13/2022 10:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on a well-deserved 1st place in the contest, Anisha :) - hugs
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Date: 11/12/2022 11:13:00 PM
Congratulation on your awesome win with this great write. Many blessing my friend
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:52:00 PM
You have illustrated beautiful scenes of the monsoon. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2022 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in my contest. You created such beautiful poetry, full of analogies and lovely rhymes.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/12/2022 7:46:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation . Blessings. Have good days
Date: 7/13/2017 8:54:00 AM
Great metaphor in the opening 3 lines of the last stanza. Ah Love, so often confusing, such a pleasure when it's right.
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:46:00 PM
Thanks for visit and appreciation. Blessings. Have good days.

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