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Rainbow Blind

Whenever my emotions are gathered pain side down, a smattering of silent, shallow, cobweb shadows wear me as woe’s weighty gown atop clouds blind to rainbows where naught is wrought but gloom’s sound, tempo fraught, inbound. ... CayCay March 20, 2018

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Date: 5/8/2019 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win CayCay! I want to join in the celebration! Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/8/2019 8:52:00 PM
another wow from me!! You made this short list. Wheeee. Let's celebrate!! I read it a second time and liked it better because I really focused on the despair in this one. LInes 2 and 3 are really well composed for imagery, sweet friend!
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:42:00 PM
Beautifully composed with your unique style CayCay! I loved it! Congratulations on your top win! : ) Happy New Year my friend! xxoo
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this soulful write.
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, CayCay.
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, CayCay .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:45:00 PM
Sadly beautiful, CayCay, and written with alliteration and rhymes too. Well done! Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:12:00 PM
- Best wishes and congratulations with your 2nd place in the contest, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:56:00 AM
beautifully penned CayCay love the use of alliteration and your imagery is packed with emotion:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your silver medal win, CayCay. Lovely.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/18/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Line for sharing your energy and time with all us via contests! I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/22/2018 7:34:00 PM
Very nicely done. This one I really want to get around to as soon as possible!!
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Date: 3/21/2018 7:07:00 PM
Emotive! ...wears me as woe’s weighty gown!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/22/2018 3:10:00 PM
Snowball contest made for fun writes, didn't it? I admit I'd never heard of that form, that mine is totally made up - not depressed, but I've been there enough to write about it. Glad to have your response, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/21/2018 11:53:00 AM
Hi CayCay, nice to meet , love your style full of colour and romance ::))) hugs from Ireland
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2018 2:45:00 PM
Oh, I've known you all my life, Superman, but I gladly return your greeting and also thank you for landing your comments here, for me - I appreciate having them. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 3/21/2018 11:26:00 AM
incredible use of lyrical language, cay, from cobweb shadows to rainbows...wow!..huggs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Nette - I always love your comments, they are dear to me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/21/2018 3:52:00 AM
Your imagery, and romantic style is reminiscent of the greats, CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
Such a lovely thing to say, Caren - I appreciate your words very much! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 3/20/2018 7:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, wonderful prose and a harrowing message of truth.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/20/2018 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jacob - I'm most glad to have your comments as my initial feedback. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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