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Rain-Acrostic

R aindrops falling down, drip, drip, drip A bout to go outside, not a chance I nside drinking tea, sip, sip, sip N o one watching me, alone I dance. November 27,2015

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Date: 12/24/2015 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement John. Well expressed Acrostic and ending verse , speaks to me as I have often danced in joy and in private, as my dancing is not very good !! A7
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for your support and comments, very much appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2015 2:19:00 AM
JOHN, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 9:42:00 PM
Thanks SKAT always nice to see your comments.
Date: 12/24/2015 12:57:00 AM
Congrats on placing in the contest with this nicely written Acrostic.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Susan you are so kind.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Susan you are so kind.
Date: 12/23/2015 4:30:00 PM
Nicely done, John. I like the 'drip' and 'sip' of rain and tea, and your acceptance of bad weather with your 'dance.' Congratulations on your placement. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra
Date: 12/1/2015 7:38:00 AM
I like acrostics, John, and enjoy rain. Felt this one in my bones. Nice job.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/1/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment, don't know if you saw my wind acrostic it was pretty good I think, hope you enjoy. JDH
Date: 11/29/2015 6:05:00 PM
I sure enjoyed reading this one, John
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/29/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Andrea feel honored by your visit, thanks. JDH
Date: 11/28/2015 1:46:00 PM
Great Acrostic John, Enjoyed the rhyming as the rain falls!! Best Wishes Kevin
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/28/2015 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Kevin. Cheers JDH
Date: 11/27/2015 4:30:00 PM
excellent John
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Tim always appreciate your feedback. JDH

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