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copyright© shonima burman At last came the rain, As a bliss from heaven. After a maddening heat , The rain finally gave us a pure relief. From our window I can see the flooding streets, And the window panes are rattled by gusty winds. Yet the people are enjoying it fully, And soothing their body and mind thoroughly. So beautiful is the rain, As if each drop tries to speak with us again and again. So pure is the rain, As it rejuvenate our spirit once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 7:45:00 PM
It sounds like it has been a while since it has rained, Shonima, which makes it all the more welcome when it finally comes! I especially liked your line where you thought each drop was trying to speak with everyone there. Very creative, Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:15:00 AM
yes, after a heat wave a rain is really refreshing and it becomes much more beautiful
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Date: 5/23/2015 2:13:00 AM
Thank u Darlene
Date: 4/29/2015 4:30:00 PM
Oh my goodness, this is as lovely as the rain! What a sweet piece which soothes the body, mind, and soul! Bravo! Pandita
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Date: 4/30/2015 1:02:00 AM
Thank you Pandita. It's such a great feeling that you liked it....:)