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Rain - Liquid Angel

Rain - her story is in her forms past, present or future, same are norms Rain – she has a complaint dislikes being quoted as she (Rain) is FALLING but had she not fallen seeds would not have risen land would have been brazen Life would have become extinct such is her importance, so distinct Rain – she has a compliment she is loved by all – kids, young, old alike kids joyous over floating of paper boats young ecstatic in love over drizzle drumming pane old ambling in memory lane over hot coffee raindrops filling Life's ocean with cheerful moments joy waves kissing Life's shores with each movement Rain – she is Liquid Devil water, in excess gushing monstrously tsunami causing devastation consuming life all of sudden destroying flora & fauna receding water spreading epidemics drenched havoc failing normalcy academics Rain – she is Liquid Angel water, life to all – human, animal, trees in womb protecting embryo in tomb blending concrete mix generating electricity, axis of all motion offering hope to desert through oasis frozen at Poles averting earth's nemesis Rain - her story is in her forms past, present or future, same are norms ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- By Hitendra Mehta Honorable Mention - Members Contest - "Rain, The Story " by - A Rambling Poet ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 1/16/2011 4:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win as well I enjoyed your very much. Jack
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Date: 1/16/2011 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so much for your congrats. Im so pleased you enjoy my poem. Jack B
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Hitendra on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:39:00 PM
By the way, GREAT poem!
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congtatulations with your entry in the contest, Hitendra. Glad to see you on the winners list. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on yur fine win in Constance's Contest, Hitendra! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:20:00 PM
Whether Rain is complaining or complimenting, acting like a Liquid Angel or a Liquid Devil, she is certainly a memorable character in your poem, Hitendra. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:46:00 AM
Just the title alone, is clever beyond words....I love this one, Hitendra....just love it!! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:02:00 AM
Beautiful write my friend and congrats on your win also in the Rain, the Story contest. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of Constance, Hitendra
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:26:00 AM
opposites attract, hitendra... beautifully woven tale!! cheers for bagging a great win in the contest!! : ) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on you well deserved win, dear Hitendra!!! Thank you for your comment too. LOve, Iolanda
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:43:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy a very special honor with luv..
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:04:00 PM
Very nice. Lots of congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:59:00 AM
Hi there! Please enter my new contest HIGHLIGHTING poets outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, submit your best verse any form any topic. Put the contry you are writing from on the bottom. I'm looking forward to reading more of your verses. Light & Love
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Date: 12/30/2010 2:14:00 AM
The biggest !WOW! ever, Good luck in the contest'' Lin~Ra
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:32:00 AM
Nice personifications of Rain covering all the attributes, Hintendra, Good luck in the contest,
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