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I walked through wind, rain and thunder, letting my long rain-drenched hair fall; wet- I went to him in wonder, into his arms I wished to crawl. My head he clasped tight to his heart, of this love I will never part; I stayed with him all the night long, though many say this love is wrong. __________________________________ April 7, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/'Rain-Drenched Hair' Copyright Protected, ID 19-1186-044-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 10/4/2019 8:48:00 AM
I think we should all mind our own business! The images and feelings from this piece are vivid DH. Beautifully done!
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Date: 10/4/2019 10:24:00 AM
Dean thanks for the great comment and the compliment!
Date: 10/4/2019 5:21:00 AM
Well I don't want to be right...wonderful concept and delivery too...
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Date: 10/4/2019 10:25:00 AM
Arturo thanks for the wonderful!

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