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Entry submitted in honor of - Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Rain, The Story 3/3 Her horse Past, wished that she should be with her new love, So that, Rain may find a new loving companion, To complete her future journey with a new experience, In the world of love, happiness, joys and even pains too, but Rain should try not to live any more, In the world of fake happiness and alluring illusions, Created by her horses Future and Past. Her horse Past was happy to see, in the eyes of his friend Rain, The seeds of a self made future and hopes to find a new life of love. Rain looked in the eyes of her other horse Future and Found the same message, as she had seen on the face of Past, She knew that if she would look into the eyes of Future, Horse Future would show, the glimpse of her new love to Rain, with whom Rain may go ahead further in her life, but, She made up her mind not to look into, The enchanting eyes of her horses Past and Future, Until she can live on herself, for building her new fate for her and a new future. She was more confident now and looked towards the rising Sun, As the Sun was inviting her to keep walking, With confidence and smile to face and make her new destiny. Rain kissed her best friends Past and Future and told them that, She would not be asking them to show, her past or future again, As she was now full of confidence, to face any situation, For building her own fortune and future, However, she would like them to be with her, as her best friends forever. The charming and lovely Rain, Now blessed with a new life of confidence, Moved ahead with her two beautiful horses, To face the life, in its true colors on her own, Without fearing the risks of the future and Caring for the dread of past. Thus started the new journey of fairy like beautiful Rain, In search of her love and adventures… Ravindra Kanpur India 28th Dec. 2010 Contest entry: For this contest only Contest Name: Rain, The Story Sponsored by: Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Written by: Ravindra K Kapoor

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Date: 12/29/2010 9:14:00 PM
Hmmm, i was waiting for her to see the handsome man of her future in the other horse!! but the message is wonderful, Ravindra. Great creativity you showed with your story of Rain. Sure to be a winner in Constance's contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:05:00 PM
Creatively charming Ravindra... awesome in every detail and did u enter all three into the contest? amazing if so and good luck my friend as this is remarkable and marvelous achievement of literary genius... wonderful expressions .. pure radiance .. with luv..
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Date: 12/29/2010 9:05:00 PM
Appreciate your thoughts and prayers for my family during this wonderful and almost tragic time..my friend.. appreicate with thankxxx..
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:43:00 PM
I love the hope of companion ship here Ravindra,, I enjoyed this here.. A very charming piece, I love the way she was above it all,,enjoyed your poem,,..p..d
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:52:00 AM
Wonderful personification of the Rain Goddess along with past and present as the hiorses, enjoyed every line of the poem, Good luck in the contest, Ravindra
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