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Rain, Hail and Snow

Rain, Hail and Snow is made in the love of you and I Touched by the flirting of your eyes Warmed by the comfort of your smile Invitations you make With the irresistible way you speak to the heart of me Then patiently wait for the shell to break and reveal the Man I am. Leaning over my sleeping face and welcoming me into the next day. Spreading your wings and opening your heart for my shelter at night. Rain, Hail and Snow is made in the same way The Sun warms the water and it rises to the sky The heat touches the clouds and it drops on you and I And whether our hearts warm the atmosphere or our emotions turn cold The weather will be the love of you and I.... Rain, Hail or Snow

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Date: 4/5/2010 10:31:00 AM
very poetic piece, enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 1/23/2009 6:32:00 AM
Very cleverly done! The way you blend the natural elements with emotions both good and bad is remarkable. BRAVO Keislam! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/1/2008 12:54:00 PM
this is a beautiful write, with passion, love and security, ans the srtong bond that exist between the two of you, take care D-nyce
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Date: 7/31/2008 7:42:00 PM
wow,speechless.really enjoyed it and suprised you dont have many comments.
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