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Quicksand Bird - Haiku

Quicksand Bird - Haiku quicksand folds over final wave of wing, good-bye bird succumbs, day ends

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Date: 4/9/2015 5:36:00 AM
Sad one..Sara
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/9/2015 7:38:00 AM
Good morning Sara, Thank you for commenting. I was going to say, "I'm glad you enjoyed it." but I don't know how enjoyable it is. I think you appreciate its meaning so I'm glad you appreciated it. Poor little birdie... It was just going after a snack on the soft sand...when things went south. Such is life. I hope you have a great day. Take care. Earl

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