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she asked what is life without love? the winds answered no life at all what is love with out proof the waters answered no love at all what is proof without telling the earth answered no proof at all she asked what is telling without truth the fires answered no truth at all she asked what am i without love the spirits answered -- simply ashes

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Date: 10/15/2009 4:05:00 PM
Oh....awsome flow @.@ and the last words echo...a lot...constructing other boxes in the laterals of a human head @.@ thanks a lot for the experience. Indeed, without love people are nothing more than frightened ashes, yet most persons have limited the meaning of love a lot. @.@
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Date: 10/7/2009 11:26:00 PM
Fantastic piece, Rain! Thanks for sharing your work here on the Soup! Donna G
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:27:00 PM
i really like this poem thank you for sharing it ..........always kate
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Date: 9/30/2009 4:29:00 PM
nice write simple put together with true meaning.
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