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Put Himself Before Others

I don't know if I appear sincere People tell me I am hard to read Unfortunately I assume On your behalf of course Were on the same page But if I am honest even I cant find my page Seldom have I a point or a meaning Like my heart is devoid of love or true feeling Why don't you find me unappealing How do you tolerate my ignorance Even though i don't mean It Its not a valid defence On this a relationship should not commence I just wish I was built like others Who Gave joy to there Mothers And didn't put Himself before Other's

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Date: 7/23/2010 5:57:00 PM
This is FREE VERSE Chris...you need to work a bit on the punctuation...only capitalize when it's the beginning of a thought or a proper noun OR if you want to HOLLER..go back and stick in the "can't" & "I" "it's" remember the ' is for a missing letter it is it's ..it was 'twas..can not can't Light & love
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Date: 7/23/2010 3:25:00 PM
Hope that just a write on a topic and not real life...If real life, I hope that you jest about this being a problem for you..There is selfish or then there is taking care of one's self...Got my attention anyway..Sara
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