Psycho Outside My Window

Ice runs through his veins Devoid of all emotion Has a carrot nose

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/20/2023 1:08:00 PM

Haha just spotted this one, brilliant!

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/21/2023 3:14:00 AM

Thanks Dilly, seems only yourself and Sigrid got this one, I’m delighted it didn’t totally melt away into obscurity lol! Cheers David

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/12/2020 5:46:00 PM

.... Clever..... Wondering how this developed or just came into your head..... May have to transfer my David crush... A boy with a brain is my biggest weakness....

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/13/2020 8:35:00 AM

I think I was having a conversation with Christopher about psychopaths and their lack of emotion or empathy, and it popped into my mind, I’m not sure about a brain Sigrid a dark imagination maybe, you deserve more than a plank of wood, hopefully you meet your soulmate soon cheers David