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Pride

Pride too proud to hide, evil devil dwells inside. Loves itself, hates others, falls then falls farther. Pride of life a sin as well, someone else's easy to tell. Ourself not so much, my faults I can't reach to touch. Before the fall goes pride, sin that just won't hide. 10/22/18

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Date: 11/7/2018 1:08:00 PM
Well done, Wren. Clever write.
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Date: 10/23/2018 6:07:00 PM
Indeed it does; well done and I hope you have great luck in the contest.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:57:00 PM
ML thank you and good luck to you as well.
Date: 10/22/2018 9:43:00 PM
Well done, Wren. Great entry.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/23/2018 6:44:00 AM
Thank you have a great day.
Date: 10/22/2018 7:08:00 PM
a very good definition of that deadly sin . Well done.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/22/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment, Andrea and you have lovely evening.

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