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Pretty Woman Starts

oh my wilful heart straying so far off the chart sultry work of art she’s ready to play her part julia makes a great tart By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 4:52:00 AM

Julia the tart must be smirking and smiling about this gorgeous tanka tribute!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 5:25:00 AM

Yeah she won’t mind Caren, got a good sense of humor like yourself, cheers for all the wonderful comments today, David

Ryan J. Mccabe

Date: 1/19/2021 12:28:00 PM

Ha! Is that a reference to Julia Childs at the end? I hope so because it's a wonderful little allusive wordplay if it is. Well written piece my friend and fellow poet.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/19/2021 12:33:00 PM

Well now that’s a bit of a pickle Ryan, take your choice, you got the double entendre, Childs or Roberts, cheers David