Pretty Birds

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Black and blue, red and green. Pretty birds. Lovely birds. Soar and dive and preen on the scene. Red and gray. They play On black and blue skies of somewhere. Pretty birds. Birds in air. Past museums and statues in the park. Modern birds. Gilded birds. Beauty even leaves a mark in the dark. Violet birds. Yellow birds. Like so many flowers in the sky. Colorful blooms. Soar and fall. As pretty birds go by skyscrapers high.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/27/2020 12:40:00 AM

Simply beautiful with awesome imagery! Your poetry sings with color. Hugs. Pandita

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/27/2020 11:07:00 AM

I am glad you liked the imagery, and found it beautiful. Thank you so much. Hugs. :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/15/2019 12:06:00 PM

Evelyn, I like these flowers in flight that you wrote in this poem. But the real blessing for me today is in your name. Best wishes for the holidays, -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/15/2019 12:17:00 PM

Richard, thank you so much for your charming comment. Happy holidays to you, too. Evelyn

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/14/2019 9:47:00 PM

What a gorgeous poem and a gorgeous graphic!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2019 10:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren. Your words are a delight! :)

Na Na

Date: 12/14/2019 7:54:00 PM

Nice One Evelyn. This reminded me of the birds that come to our bird feeder outside. so many different kinds. Thanks for sharing this

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/14/2019 10:29:00 PM

You're welcome, Greg. I'm so glad this one brought pleasant thoughts to mind. Thank you. :)