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Predestined - Divine

I spoke her thoughts -- she spoke mine Our meeting sure predestined, Divine ... Nestling her hand in mine, rainbows arched on high ~ in the Heaven of our hearts, as angels sighed In synchrony the magic flowed, an endless carousel moments and ideas shared, visions coursed through us pell-mell ~ Our hearts launched skyward, as in deepest love we fell ... June 22, 2018

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2018 8:06:00 PM

Gershon, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautifully articulated . Hugs Eve ~`*

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/27/2018 9:08:00 PM

Thank you for your generous praise, Eve. Much appreciated! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 6/26/2018 5:50:00 PM

I fell in love with this Gershon,really lovely.Congrats also on your win, I’m not surprised.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2018 9:58:00 PM

Sigh! No one has ever fallen in love with anything I've written before...I'm honored and humbled. Thank you so much, Sylvia. You've made my day! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/25/2018 11:47:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on this win! Such a love story! Well done. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2018 10:00:00 PM

---And it was really true too! Made it a bit easier to write. Thank you again, Susan, as always, for your encouragement! ~ Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/25/2018 9:47:00 AM

Back with congratulations xo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2018 5:16:00 PM

Appreciated, Maureen. :) gw

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 6:40:00 AM

Now that is romance... nice romantic lines Gershon.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2018 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, and thank you for this sponsoring this Muse-stretching contest! ~ Gershon

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/24/2018 10:39:00 PM

Your romantic pen takes me to glorious heights beyond heaven, Gershon. Some things are just beautifully meant to be..'Nestling her hand in mine, rainbows arched on high ~ in the Heaven of our hearts, as angels sighed' - ah such poetic bliss :) A star dusted love story! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2018 5:15:00 PM

Beyond heaven, Susan S-T-N? Hmmm. That should be quite the 'scoop,' although not surprising considering your angelic quill, character, and mien... Hope you took some photos and plan to cash in. (btw: I'll take 10% as a 'finder's fee.') ... ~ Silly in Chicago

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/23/2018 4:10:00 PM

Beautiful! I think we have a winner... beyond that perfect rhyme, romantic love story :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2018 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for your encouraging words, Susan. Best always, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/23/2018 9:25:00 AM

Ooh la la. You haven't pulled out your romantic sword in a while, I must warn the women, we're not safe ;p Fabulous ink my friend! xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2018 11:06:00 PM

Well, better safe than sorry, I guess! … Thank you for encouraging me, Maureen, as you always do. Best always, gw (soup mail).

Robertina B.

Date: 6/22/2018 6:06:00 PM

"Such a glorious rhyme, my dear friend.. I feel like I'm soaring high in the heavens.. This rhyme is a gem, dear friend.. Many blessings!"

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2018 11:05:00 PM

Thank you for your generous assessment, Robertina. I am always happy to read your kind words. Best wishes, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 6:05:00 PM

Beautiful, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2018 11:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. And thanks also for putting that comma between "beautiful" and "Gershon!" :) gw