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Her delicate fingers fondle each piece held above the puzzle, waiting release, causing her concentration to increase. A smile tugs at the corners of her lips, and as the occasional swear word slips she gives up, placing her hands on her hips. I chuckle and she pretends to be mad, and I reciprocate, looking so sad she quickly relents, whispering, "my bad." The puzzle is the last thing on my mind, to doubt her beauty, I'd have to be blind, for she's gorgeous, with a perfect behind. I realize just how lucky we are, like kids with our hands in the cookie jar, in the eyes of each, the other's a star. (Rhyme) 3/19/2017

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Date: 5/17/2018 8:07:00 AM
Sweet, Emile.
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visit my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2017 9:49:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 3/31/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Donna, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Date: 3/29/2017 7:00:00 AM
Congrats Emile, for your well-deserved second placement, with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/29/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Teddy, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2017 7:58:00 PM
this is really NICE, Emile. Glad I finally saw this one.BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/26/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, I welcome your visits and appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2017 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, a joy to read, Roy. :))
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Date: 3/24/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2017 9:50:00 AM
Nice! Congrats ?? JE
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Date: 3/23/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2017 2:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful write. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 3/23/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Kai, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2017 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations! Emile!! Wonderful and sensual (tactfully:)). Very smooth! Well done my friend!! Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/23/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Deborah, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2017 10:30:00 PM
The sensuous tone makes this a beauty! Congrats, Emile, on your 2nd place win in my contest! :) Kim
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Date: 3/23/2017 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Kim, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest with such talented poets. Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 4:35:00 PM
You present a lovely, clever buildup to this pleasurable poem, Emile; mutual love and attraction are what help to make a relationship work. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/20/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Paul, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 1:47:00 PM
awhh, how sweet is this love connection, emile... doing things together heightens a relationship's bond... your artwords inspire.. huggs
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I truly appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 12:42:00 PM
Such precious moments indeed :) Ther;s so much love in your words, it makes me smile.
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 6:19:00 AM
- Sometimes we forget to enjoy what we have - it is important to look at the "stars" and enjoy the moments - A beautiful poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your continued support, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2017 10:17:00 PM
Precious indeed Emile! Loved this :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your support, Emile.

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