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Precious Moments

Hold my soft hand as our cheeks almost touch, this precious moment means so very much, we’ve revived our love and passion as such. The bluebirds sing our tune and gently sway, to the marvelous beauty of the day, oh please my love, promise to always stay. As we sit on the ledge of this white fount, may the water flow softly and surmount, the love in my heart exceeds the amount. I hear the sounds of nature calling me, as the beauty of the sky sets us free, this day we are making a memory. Would you take my hand in marriage my sweet? I promise to sweep you off your kind feet, and every year at our fount we shall meet. I chose the figurine with the couple in front of the fountain. I hope the picture I posted is the right one. :) 150 syllables total checked at howmanysyllables.com Precious Moments Contest March 19, 2017

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Date: 3/29/2017 6:58:00 AM
Greetings Laura, for your WIN with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/25/2017 8:03:00 PM
So sweet this is. Love how you put the picture with it. Another great win, Laura. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/23/2017 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations Laura. i like this very much. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:39:00 PM
Simply lovely, Luloo! Congrats on your placement! Hugs, Kim
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations Laura!! Beautiful write!! Well done my friend! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:27:00 PM
Lovely Laura, Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
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