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Precious Gem

My rock that sparkles on arrival emotions swell inside warm dewdrops Leaving the gates open from my mind drawing from out of this dream golden a beautiful runway opens sparkling Sweetly flying to you my heart pure lights up within breathing deep loving Warmly sighs feelings so good loving somebody so special very hot beautiful who smiles dazzling lights up wrote in 9 syllable count a beautiful cloud that hangs 10 lines to represent something perfect

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 1:18:00 PM

Ahhh! this is beautiful Liam. The sign of a true romantic at heart. Gems are for those who those who appreciate them; hold on to this one my friend! #7 // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/24/2014 2:37:00 PM

loved much the last line "beautiful who smiles dazzling lights up", carried an excellent beauty. Lovely penned my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 9:16:00 AM

bl thank you dear pal truly wonderful comment very beautiful bless you

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/23/2014 11:09:00 AM

A lover that lights up your life and sparkles and shines like a gem is a true find and a keeper. Enjoyed your romantic poem, Liam, and hope to read many more. I also like your teaming up with Gary. I've read two poems so far and they lifted me up above the ordinary into a world of fantasy, dreams and playtime for the child in me. Blessings, Darlene

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 1:37:00 PM

well thats how i look at it darlene yeah myself and gary blend like gold in a leprechauns treasure smiling the innocence of love always draws beautiful in my eyes thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2014 6:01:00 AM

- Hey Mr. Romance, a real precious gem !!!! - Beautiful written !!! - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 8:58:00 AM

anne lise sweet smiling beautiful dazzling comment thank you kindly dear pal you have a blessed sunday

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/23/2014 2:45:00 AM

Such a very beautiful love poem that you've penned here Liam my dear friend. Very enchanting! I truly enjoyed reading this one so early this morning. For sure it made me smile a lot. A 7 for me! Have a wonderful Sunday! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 2:50:00 AM

dorian a treasure always shines i believe thank you dear friend it never looses its sparkle wonderful comment deeply appreciated have a blessed beautiful sunday

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 2:46:00 AM

you never loose a treasured feeling eileen that much i know dear friend it always sparkles deeply wonderful comment pal deeply appreciated have a blessed sunday

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/23/2014 2:37:00 AM

Liam, this is beautiful. Romance never dies...Your poem proves that.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/23/2014 2:56:00 AM

sorry eileen your reply went up i do not know why