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Port- a Pleiades

prussian sea from afar~ pearly shore in slumber placidly anchored ships pacific moon smiling patiently waiting dawn promise of your come back painted in the starlight 12 April 2021 For “ Pleiades - P Poetry Contest” Sponsored by Kim Merryman 2nd place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2021 11:17:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/13/2021 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a magnificent picture with few words! BW ~ Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 2:49:00 AM

- Congratulations ... much told in this little poem ... well done, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathleen Austin

Date: 4/12/2021 2:42:00 PM

I echo Andrea's sentiments entirely. You've painted so vivid a picture. Nice!

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:45:00 PM

JCB, your painted a delightful picture with your Pleiades! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:19:00 PM

I just love the imagery you used in yours. Not that easy to do in this form . Congrats on the win.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/12/2021 7:58:00 AM

Your poem, an inspiration for the world of poetry. Your vivid imagery tells a story; others would take chapters to express. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Take Care, Paulette