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Polar Bear

The polar bear eats Essentially meat Including Man If it can; Now that you know Do not go Ever near A polar bear.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/27/2019 11:25:00 AM

I must remember that. Nice one, Kai

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/27/2019 1:13:00 PM

Just a scientific fact

Mike Hauser

Date: 10/30/2018 10:16:00 PM

Good advice! Lol! Nice...

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2017 4:18:00 PM

You did this really well..

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/23/2017 9:14:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. My intention has been to work with it until it conforms to the contest's requirements, but I wasn't having time for poetry lately. When I get back into it, I'll check out your new poems

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2017 8:37:00 PM

This is cute as the dickens, Hannah!!! Did you SEE the actual happening to the poor boy with the polar bears? I think I know what you are talking about down here. Let me go to Soupmail and make sure!! I had something else I wanted to tell you anyway.

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/9/2017 9:27:00 PM

3 kids entered the zoo one night, I think 1987, and dared each other to do it. The one who did it first woke the bears and was attacked. The others ran screaming for help, but it was too late.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/9/2017 3:09:00 PM

Nicely done, Hannah, beware of the bear. Good luck in the contest. John

Hannah Borke
Date: 11/9/2017 9:23:00 PM

Thanks. This is a rough draft. If I don't work on it and mess up the rhyme, no chance.

Hannah Borke

Date: 11/7/2017 4:26:00 PM

Attention Andrea, if you see this -- it got boosted by six, but only five were intended. Inserting this comment, added another. I'll be making an effort to avoid more. You, and no one else, will know what I'm talking about.

John Gondolf
Date: 11/9/2017 3:10:00 PM

Hmmm, you ladies have some kind of a secret code going on here? ;)