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Dance of Light heavens brighten stars eyes I gaze into unlocks shackles of my soul Drowning passion of our burning fire Illuminating glow of my desire We've shared an inordinate amount of happiness, and desires Poetic romance has always sparked what has keep our love alive Alone encased in darkness of payne’s grey shadows Blind brush fingers trace the shadow of your strong face Fragile substance of my soul is warp with sorrows Left with the rhythm of your heartbeat life in grace Between your breasts nestle whispers and wet tears lace 11/4/2015
One modern Haiku: 3 lines: Syllables 5,7,5 A couplet: 2 lines Free verse: 2 lines English Quintain: 5 lines: Rhyming scheme ababb Contest: A Poet’s Dozen Poetry Contest Sponsored By: Silent One

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Date: 11/7/2015 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. Janice
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:51:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your wonderful win with this passionate and romantic poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/7/2015 3:11:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 1:26:00 PM
Such a lovely and romantic poem, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/6/2015 10:55:00 PM
A warm, affirming romantic write, Eve. Congrats! hugs!
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Date: 11/6/2015 9:18:00 PM
So poetic n romantic expression. I love your poems. Congrats on your win Hugs Anisha
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 10:19:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha, so very much for the compliment and the congratulations Hugs Eve
Date: 11/6/2015 7:44:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this fine poem my friend. Love those verses!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 10:18:00 PM
Robert, thank you so very much for the compliment and the congratulations, I am glad you liked it. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/6/2015 7:21:00 PM
Very warm! Congrats Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Balveen, for the compliment and the congratulations Hugs Eve
Date: 11/6/2015 8:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading you work..There is a great poetic quaity to the lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 11/6/2015 1:34:00 AM
Hi Eve, good luck in the contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Grace, for your support. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/6/2015 1:19:00 AM
Ah this is so so amazingly beautiful Eve and such smoothly flowing .. Gl in contest!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma for your wonderful compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/5/2015 6:47:00 PM
Very beautiful, Eve - I enjoyed your poem very much ... CayCay
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay, for your compliment and your great support. Hugs Eve

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