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I dreamt a sad dream he had on soft blue booties even angels wept as his coffin was lowered forever my broken heart ________________________ May 7, 2016 Poetry/Tanka/Baby Boy In Blue Copyright Protected, ID 16-787-348-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Short Form Poetry sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Second Place

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/18/2016 3:29:00 PM

So sad.... Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 4:11:00 PM

So touched by this heartfelt tanka, Constance! Your top win is much deserved...congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 9:26:00 PM

Paul, thank you so much for your compassion, compliment and congratulations ~

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2016 1:59:00 PM

Filled with emotion. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 9:27:00 PM

Bl, thanks for the congratulations and the love ~

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2016 11:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win BW

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:06:00 PM

Joseph thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:22:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:00:00 PM

Thank you so much

Karam Misra

Date: 5/14/2016 11:36:00 PM

"Blue booties", sad. Congrats on your win, Broken. ~karam~

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:01:00 PM

Karam yes it is a sad memory, thanks for the congratulations

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/14/2016 10:47:00 PM

Congrats Constance on this effective poem.

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:02:00 PM

Rob thanks for the congratulations

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/14/2016 6:50:00 PM

So lovely and so sad, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'short form' contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:04:00 PM

Sandra thanks for visiting and for the congratulations and the 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 5:54:00 PM

a very emotional one, Constance. I got very few sad ones in the contest, and this was very lovely in its portrayal of the lost son. Congrats in my contest. (love how the last line explains your Broken Wings name as well, because it's so much of what your poetry is all about).

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 12:05:00 PM

Andrea thanks for the wonderful contests and for my wonderful placement