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Poetry of Life

In the blue hills I chased butterflies in rainbow arc, they all disappeared in the debris of the fallen sky. I drowned in the whirlpool of the tempest of times, the turbulent river carried away far the driftwood, but it grew a sapling in the shelter of rocky ledge. From hollow wood sprouted the foliage of passion, canopy found colors of new sky enter a poet’s heart, on its rhythmic cadence you built a nest of belonging. As the twilight falls on the silence of the static time the poetry of life flows to the past with you and me. September 29, 2019 Contest : Story Of My Life In Ten Lines Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 10/4/2019 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations and enjoyed your words. Bless you always, Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:46:00 PM
From the hollow wood sprouted the foliage of passion...what a wonderful line. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Subimal! :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:21:00 PM
- Subimal, congratulations on your 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 2:38:00 PM
Great imagery in you poem, some great lines, especially the first and 7th.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/29/2019 6:51:00 AM
Life a poetry -Very nicely penned.
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