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poetic language



                       you can take away words that rhyme,
                snow white paper,
      the falling of ink, from a pen that likes to scribble in color,

               - yes syllables will suffer, as will paragraphs -

     you can keep sentences from connecting,
             however . . 

                   my imagination will always find a way,
                                                           to play?
                                                       -------------

 
~ because poetry is a part of me ~
a simple little scribble    :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/11/2018 11:44:00 PM
Yes yes just another innocent little scribble for us to nibble on. I'm hereby placing myself on a limit of reading no more than 2 of your poems per every 24 hours. They're really all so very very good. This one particularly. Felt like satin drapes gently falling to the floor. Well done.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 12/12/2018 12:35:00 AM
I would of course love to read more but every time I do I end up writing some coarsely worded fisherman wishing well poem all the while acutely aware that my lack of eloquence disqualifies me from the proper enjoyment of yours. :(
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/12/2018 12:01:00 AM
Oh my!! These words feel like satin softly falling to the floor? They must slide along the skin first. If you wish to read more that is me, then you will feel more. (Just saying) As my poetic whispers caress many moments of love, playfulness and passion. Thank you Phillip, your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 10/18/2018 2:27:00 AM
Wonderful. Poetic license and all ready for stream of consciousness. I like that...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/18/2018 10:11:00 AM
:) Thank you Kai. I appreciate your kind words. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/10/2018 9:45:00 PM
Hey Brandy, you have a wonderful way with words I must say. Great imagination and poetry is a part of you, a wonderful part :) Very nice as always hugs ~Charlie
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/10/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. :) And when words want to play, I let them curl around me and my imagination. Sometimes emotions take over, and that is perfectly okay. :) Your thoughts are always appreciated. Hugs, Brandy
Date: 10/10/2018 10:36:00 AM
Powerful. Your future hubby may have problems with the bond you have with words. Explore continuously with the colors!!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/10/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Vegter. Your thoughts bring a smile and a giggle. :) I don't think so, as I am not searching for love. Words and colors will always be a part of me. :) I appreciate your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/9/2018 6:15:00 PM
Hi Brandy, a wonderful write from your pen. I love free verse, I think it goes give greater scope to the poet. So many tangents one can travel, there are no limitations. I love the creative content of this piece Brandy. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/9/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Vladislav. Writing in free verse does give the poet more options, more ways to be expressive- without having to follow a pattern. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. :) Happy Wednesday to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/9/2018 4:36:00 PM
Brilliant, love the sentiment. yes need to get off the rail tracks, and discover oneself.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/9/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Harry. It is easy to just be- around moments. Poetry is a part of everything. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/9/2018 2:09:00 AM
Your imagination and your love for poetry always creates beautiful verses to read. Sorry for not being around to read your lovely poetry, Brandy. I sometimes get too busy to have time for Poetry Soup. T.J
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/9/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you T.J. It is always a joy to read your lovely comments. I appreciate you and your kindness. No worries my dear friend, as life does keep us busy. Poetry is a part of us- but shouldn't consume our every moment. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/8/2018 8:37:00 AM
Poetry is about imagination and belief.. removing parts of speech can create an interesting puzzle that actually enhances the essence of true poetic thought. Brandy, your scribbles reveal your brilliance of insight.. so impressed with your gifted pen and the beautiful mind behind it!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/8/2018 8:48:00 PM
The connection between words, and emotions of the heart- is exactly that. There will always be a connection. :) I am swept away in your thoughts. Thank you Lyric Man. I am just being simple poetic me. I always will be. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/5/2018 10:10:00 AM
Yes, the poetic logic always keeps the sentences connected.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/5/2018 7:09:00 PM
Of course. :) Thank you Charlie. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 11:22:00 PM
You, my dear...wear poetry like a morning dress engulfed by sunshine...or like a masterpiece painting upon your skin...as you dive into an ocean of pearls...each pearl exploding with poetic symphonic resonance...and each word, a servant to your muse...ok, cue cards down :)...time for a snack lol...love & poetic vibrations...^WW^
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/5/2018 7:08:00 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts make me smile, blush and my heart flutter all at the same. :) I am almost speechless. Lol. I am a little breathless. Words follow me, it seems. I hope you enjoyed that snack. :) Love and Poetic whispers. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 5:07:00 PM
Short, but very sweet.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Robert. :) Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 3:01:00 PM
I love it that your poem is twisting and shouting her truth and your imagination understands the value of playing, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Caren. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Words are not always needed, because the imagination is able to play without them. To create a poetic moment. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 2:59:00 PM
incredible show of your love for poetry, brandy... if for a contest, sending my thumbs up...ohh, lovely!...huggs
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thank you nette. :) I appreciate your kind words, and for the thumbs up. That is very sweet of you. I am smiling. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 12:46:00 PM
Potent words from a skilled pen. Indeed--poetry is very much part of you. Keep writing, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 1:26:00 PM
I appreciate you Vijay. Thank you so much for being here and for reading my poetic whispers. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 12:39:00 PM
Right on! and write on! Nicely penned, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 1:24:00 PM
:) Thank you Daniel. Poetic moments shall always find me, as they are a part of me. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 12:22:00 PM
I am thankful that poetry is a part of you and that your imagination will always find a way to play. And I am hopeful that you will always share these simple little scribbles with us...I am a big fan Brandy. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 1:21:00 PM
:) Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words, for your support. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 11:39:00 AM
Poetry at its best.... nothing can stop the words from flowing.. Such a powerful pen you have...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Your kind words are appreciated. This is just a simple scribble from my pen. ~ Brandy
Date: 10/4/2018 11:11:00 AM
Same here...great
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 1:19:00 PM
:) Thank you Tim. May your thoughts always touch the sky. ~ Brandy